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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2003-07-09 02:08 AM


Basics--
inconsistencies...
you would think
that was enough--
"A" does not
compute with "B",
and "C"? Just doesn't
have the stuff
to stand behind
an equal sign
variety
begs for the gift
of the hugged
parentheses
as if solutions
were "as if..."
as if the hunger
were not mine--
as if I even
bleeped a blip.

Simple Simon
met the pieman
just outside the bakery--
said the Simon
to the pieman,
"Tell me, what is it
you see?"

"Angles and the planes of cut--
pray a knife find parity."
Apple-pie geometry?
feed the need
of have-too-much.
pray
for all
the lack thereof--
as if, it is--

can be

enough.

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (07-09-2003 03:54 AM).]

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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2003-07-09 06:49 AM


feed the need
of have-too-much.
pray
for all
the lack thereof--
as if, it is--

can be

enough

-----------

Excellent write O Serene One...

regards
sudhir

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2003-07-09 06:51 AM


can be

enough

is it ever really enough tho?
good thoughts, homespun philosophy with a twist.........

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

3 posted 2003-07-09 08:01 AM


Very nice writing.....
thank you...

Goldenrose.

Wind
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4 posted 2003-07-09 08:52 AM


Oh, aren't you just a little devil? you are so amazing

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2003-07-09 08:55 AM


inconsistencies...
you would think
that was enough--
"A" does not
compute with "B",
and "C"? Just doesn't
have the stuff
to stand behind
an equal sign
variety
begs for the gift
of the hugged
parentheses
depends does it not... on the variables and the actions being taken on them as to whether they can stand behind or beside an equal sign.. or is that an equal sine?


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-07-09 09:01 AM


Love it!  You are amazing!
Love ya lady!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2003-07-09 09:08 AM


serenity,
There is never enough apple pie.

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-07-09 09:32 AM


Simple Simon
met the pieman
just outside the bakery--
said the Simon
to the pieman,
"Tell me, what is it
you see?"

"Angles and the planes of cut--
pray a knife find parity."
Apple-pie geometry?
feed the need
of have-too-much.
pray
for all
the lack thereof--
as if, it is--

can be

enough.


WHEEEWWW!!!  You go, girl!!

And this is my feelings exactly!!!!!
as if I even
bleeped a blip.


Loveya, girlie  
Me

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-09-2003 09:33 AM).]

Wind
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9 posted 2003-07-09 09:34 AM


byebye Miss American pie
Nightshade
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just out of reach
10 posted 2003-07-09 09:53 AM


Good heavens lady...lend me your muse!!!! Awesome. hugs, Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~  
      

    

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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11 posted 2003-07-09 10:03 AM


I love how you bleep your blips!--and blip your bleeps! One equals the other, does it not? Enough said!  

Huggums,
EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (07-09-2003 10:06 AM).]

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA
12 posted 2003-07-09 10:21 AM


I was never good at math...or formulas and in general I can never get enough!? *shrugs* *walks off now rambling somemore nonsense*

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
13 posted 2003-07-09 12:19 PM


There is something in this which is esoterically hysterically to me.  I have to try to remember to send it to you when I am on the machine on which it is being written.  I'll just leave it at:  who said sick minds don't think alike?

*smile*

Liked the poem!!!

serenity blaze
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Posts 27738

14 posted 2003-07-10 12:04 PM


Ice? Thanks much for sharing, and yep, to the Cap? I DO have my own formulas--but you KNEW that.

Thanks all, once again. I hug you all to my heart and curtsey with gratitude.

Ya'll tolerate me better than I do myself.



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