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x8x_bigmike
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since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

0 posted 2003-07-09 12:36 PM

I wait for your call day and night
Looking at the clock
Slowly, anticipating
Your sweet voice
So I dream when my
Phone doesn’t ring, of nights
Suddenly forgotten

Our life distant in my present
I scream nightmares
Calling me deep
Stuck hopelessly
Feeling forgotten

She once rubbed my head
And whispered in my ear
Marry me
But now alone I see
My passions folly
Has left me wanting

So I stay stuck
Like unread pages
Counting the minutes

But then dreaming again
Your hand in mine
The wind blows
Me kisses suddenly
Close, cupids point
Piercing my sleep
Fooling me

So I sit now
The night before
We talk, hoping
Waiting
Tirelessly
For the dream
That never comes

As frost said
The sweet pang
It cost me not to call
I stay vivid in my memory
Of our life u think too small
Devoid of aspiration

With no faith in me
I live constantly
In a state of oblivion

I want to read this poem
To you while you sleep
So you can hear me speak
And not listen

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-07-09 12:45 PM

oh, that's quite an ending there
and what would you do if she did hear, and listen?

BTW, welcome to Passions, bigmike.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2003-07-09 12:47 PM

x8x_bigmike - how well these thoughts are known, to speak and not to listen of one. Never could figure it out...

BC

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Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

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3 posted 2003-07-09 01:03 AM

You 'n icebox aren't waiting for each other tonight, are you?
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x8x_bigmike
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

4 posted 2003-07-09 01:05 AM

the speak and not listen...its like...scared to be vulnerable about how i feel...and secondly not wanting to hurt her...even though she has hurt me deeply...im not sure why i feel like that...im still missing her i guess...

quatro
Member

since 2003-04-29

Posts 392
Galveston, Texas

5 posted 2003-07-09 01:06 AM

Oh my gosh! I loved this! Especially your ending.

Thanks for sharing.

quatro

x8x_bigmike
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

6 posted 2003-07-09 01:07 AM

lol dont think so...but i think he has some years on me...looks like we relate on some level...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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7 posted 2003-07-09 04:31 AM

great ending! Welcome to Passions!

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