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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Flickering Flickers in the night Light the love beacon of one Lonely firefly heart. believe in what your heart feels... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
lonely firefly heart oh that reads so smooth... i love it. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now you know this just became a  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful flickers of the night! Love, Margherita  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Gemma...I'm glad you enjoyed it.. Karilea, your support is very kind.. Thank you Sy...I appreciate your words of encouragement.. Margherita...I watched the fireflies last night...they are wonder... thank you for your comments.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Scorpio! This is hauntingly lovely. I especially enjoyed... "Lonely firefly heart." These words flow beautifully! *May I borrow your muse for the summer?*  Very nicely written.. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Nancy,I'd be honoured to share my muse with you and not just for the summer...I'm glad you liked this little poem...your support and encouragement means a great deal to me...more than you'll ever know...thank you.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Chrissypooh Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 80Canada |
Very well written Scorpio!! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Scorpio, this is so beautiful and kind of sad..... ~lonely flickers in the night~ "If I know there's no possible way I can change something or do about something, then I push it to the back room in my mind & slam the door on it." ~Gary~ ~Heart hugs to you from me~ Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-07-2003 03:47 PM).] |
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papabear Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 102Atlanta, GA |
good write I’ve loved; I’ve lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Used to have fun as a young boy in Florida watching firefly's and throwing rocks in the air and watching the bats follow them down to the ground and pull out of their dive just before they would crash...James |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a lovely write! TD |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Chrissypooh.. Ethel, you have to remember that the flickering light of firefly attracts a mate...and most of the time it does work...they're not lonely for long.. Thank you papabear for commenting...much appreciated.. Thanks for reading James...as kids we would catch flreflies and put them in a jar...we thought they would replace our flashlights.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you, Kathleen...I'm glad you liked it.. |
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