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Dusk till dawn
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Dusk till dawn |
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poet25 Junior Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 18PE, Canada |
A fallen moon crescent accentuates the day Daylight cascading over pure beauty In A delicate state as the dew still settles in the grass Time slowly creeps into reality Breath frozen with coming of morning Yet surrounded by the comfort that is upon my neck No longer having to close my eyes, because she is laying next to me A sunrise, so full of fire that the sky becomes a blazing inferno Much like the feeling in my heart The wind lightly whispers My face nears yours as if I plan to do the same How ever all my lips do is steal a kiss I used to believe that I could not continue But now I know the meaning of true love Almost as if I read it in you milky smooth skin Or was it a sensation from your velvet lips A symphony plays your voice to me While I fixate on the diamonds in your eyes Rapidly emotions run through me like a roaring river Quietly I sit thinking that I can not wait Until the moonlights up the sky And I get to hold you in my arms again. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful and much enjoyed! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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IntoTheFlames Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 92Va, USA |
"A fallen moon crescent accentuates the day Daylight cascading over pure beauty" I do believe that these are the most beautiful lines I have ever read! Great write! ~*Summer*~ |
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poet25 Junior Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 18PE, Canada |
Thank you nancy that is much appreciated. And flames that has got to be one of the greatest responses I have ever had thank you very much you struck me deep with that comment. |
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