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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-07-06 03:45 PM


You're With Him

I'm sitting here looking at your picture again.
Pictures are all I have left of you today.
Well, I do have some good and bad memories
of a jaded past haphazardly tucked away.
Did I ever tell you that you have perfect lips?
No, I didn't think so, but there were lots of
words that I didn't say that I should have and
lots of words that I said that I shouldn't have.
I always seem to figure things like this out
when its much too late to work them out.
That's part of the reason why you're with him and
I'm one thousand one hundred and two miles from
you realizing once again what a fool I've been.

JamesLee
July06
2003
IRemember
YouBeth
AllThose
YearsAgo
I'mTaking
MyMedicine.


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-07-06 05:59 PM


JamesMichael~
Your 'Beth' series are poignantly touching~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-07-06 06:54 PM


Thanks Marge...she was an angel that I put through hell...now I know better....James
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just out of reach
3 posted 2003-07-06 08:56 PM


James ... this is tugging so at my heartstrings! lovely. Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~  
      

    

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2003-07-06 09:02 PM


Oh goodness, been there done that.
Life works in strange ways, and without
knowing the reasons, I still believe in them.

Be happy, and make your peace James~

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5 posted 2003-07-06 09:28 PM


Painful, poignant write... done beautifully.
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6 posted 2003-07-06 09:35 PM


Great write James...
Beth seems to have had a lasting impact on you.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

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7 posted 2003-07-06 09:54 PM


Well done James...

believe in what your heart feels...

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