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freespirit
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since 2003-07-03
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0 posted 2003-07-05 01:54 PM



Lying in the golden meadow
under the autumn moon
you reach for me
and I shiver with your touch.


Slowly you come to me
and take my breath with your kiss.
How sweet your lips taste
pure as honey.


I see your silhouette
against the midnight sky
and shudder to think that you are mine.


You lay beside me
and I lay my head on your chest.


This is where we both belong
together...
embracing...
each others souls forever.




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Wind
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1 posted 2003-07-05 02:03 PM


that was beautiful, and may I be the first to welcome you to this place..

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

LeeJ
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2 posted 2003-07-05 02:09 PM


lovely poem...what else is more richer, what more can give and recieve and be most fulfilling but to love like words as these.  Welcome, looking forward to reading more of your lovely poetry.  I think you'll find everyone here, not only kind, but wise, helpful and talented to.  
Local Rebel
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Southern Abstentia
3 posted 2003-07-05 03:20 PM


very nice first post -- welcome
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-07-05 03:33 PM


I'm embracing this beautiful poem...James
garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-07-05 04:17 PM


This is where we both belong
together...
embracing...
each others souls forever.


What a beautiful first post. You will find that I'm one of the hopeless romantics around Passions. I think I'm going to enjoy reading your poems.
And, I would like to welcome you to these pages of blue.....
Hugs  
Ethel...garysgirl

freespirit
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since 2003-07-03
Posts 24
USA
6 posted 2003-07-05 05:48 PM


Thanks so much everyone!! I hope to be posting more poems soon! I love reading you poems as well! You are too kind!!

Janette
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7 posted 2003-07-05 06:06 PM


Welcome to Passions!

This is a lovely romantic write, enjoyed.  

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2003-07-05 06:12 PM



Welcome to Passions!  What a wonderful entrance - Embracing Souls!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
9 posted 2003-07-06 05:16 AM


Lovely poem, reminds me of my love, I feel like we have met before...have we?

Welcome To Passions (Free Spirit)

SongVixen
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since 2003-07-06
Posts 43
England
10 posted 2003-07-06 05:52 AM


Oh My This is sooo Romantic, I could write a song by the inspiration. Great poetry. I see you are new at Passions also.

[This message has been edited by SongVixen (07-06-2003 05:54 AM).]

freespirit
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since 2003-07-03
Posts 24
USA
11 posted 2003-07-06 12:26 PM


Why do you feel like that ARH? I have posted on your poems if that is what you mean. I did say that they inspired me to write again.

WOW, Songvixen,you could write a song, THANKS!!

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
12 posted 2003-07-07 01:07 AM


I thought you were my sister, its ironic, she uses the name free spirit and loves Unicorns...so I thought you might have been her trying to surprise me, by joining and posting on Passions.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
13 posted 2003-07-07 01:10 AM


Very very nice!
Welcome to Passions, freespirit.
I really like that name!

freespirit
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since 2003-07-03
Posts 24
USA
14 posted 2003-07-07 02:28 AM


ARH - That explains things, thanks for clearing that up for me.  


Thanks Midnitesun,
I like your icon. haha

[This message has been edited by freespirit (07-07-2003 02:30 AM).]

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
15 posted 2003-07-07 05:56 PM


freespirit

Thank you for sharing your beautiful words of love and welcome to Passions.

"What is life
without the radiance
of love?"

Take care....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

quatro
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since 2003-04-29
Posts 392
Galveston, Texas
16 posted 2003-07-07 06:21 PM


What a wonderful beginning for a "new" beginning in "Passions".

quatro

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
17 posted 2003-07-07 08:18 PM


Freespirit:

first of all your name is amazing
Good for you
secondly, this is a beautiful entrance!\
Welcome to PIP!
You fit in nicely already

God, this is an beautiful write
xxoo

Nightshade
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just out of reach
18 posted 2003-07-07 10:09 PM






Enjoyed your first post!!

Ceinwyn
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VA
19 posted 2003-07-07 10:17 PM


enjoyed and welcome

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

ThisDiamond
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Michigan, USA
20 posted 2003-07-07 10:29 PM


What a lovely entrance.
Welcome to Pip.
Look forward to writing with you.
ThisDiamond

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21 posted 2003-07-08 02:31 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! Awwwwwwwww, this is such a gorgeous and loving debut, sweet friend, I love hearing of people happily in love and this made me smile too, yay, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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