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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-07-04 08:07 AM


A Beautiful Sensation

Nothing as nice as a
woman that just kind of
melts into my arms.
As she lays her head on
my shoulder and softly rubs
my leg it relaxes me and
makes me feel appreciated.
She is so soft and feminine and
has such a sweet spirit that I
can feel a sensual connection.
And that all adds up to
a beautiful sensation.

JamesLee
July04
2003

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Ericc
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1 posted 2003-07-04 08:44 AM


It does add up....beautifuly.
Eric

catalinamoon
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2 posted 2003-07-04 08:46 AM


Hi James, nice to see men like that as much as women.
Sandra

Patricia
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3 posted 2003-07-04 10:16 AM


A soft write, James.  Nothing like feeling appreciated for who you are!

Patricia

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-07-04 10:19 AM


Your poem creates beautiful sensations as well...

Warm hugs,
EA

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2003-07-04 10:33 AM


lovely thoughts James... a pleasant touch to your words.

M

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2003-07-04 11:17 AM


James - you said it well, you sure did...

BC

LeeJ
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7 posted 2003-07-04 11:25 AM


oh yes, my friend...such a small intimate tresure, yet well worth the wait when finally found.... you have captured here a moment in time that none other can replace.    
Janette
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8 posted 2003-07-05 11:07 AM


Masculine arms to melt into ... *sigh* ... cuddling, ya gotta love it.

Enjoyed.

Neeraja
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9 posted 2003-07-05 11:18 AM


I am melting...

passing shadows
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10 posted 2003-07-05 01:06 PM


*note to self* lay head on shoulder and rub leg softly

I forgot about little things like that a long time ago...good to remember in case I get the opportunity again

freespirit
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11 posted 2003-07-05 06:02 PM


This is so soft, your writing is gentle and loving.
vandana
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12 posted 2003-07-08 02:27 PM


nice
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