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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2003-07-04 11:54 AM


This is what happens when you try to rhyme Schmuck Luck. Then read it out loud. Oh! My!
LOL
Enjoy Love Bon-Bon

Schmuck Luck

There’s a little ole duck by the name
of Schmuck Luck
He knows a little ole gal who lives
in Lubbock
This little ole gal goes
by
the name Moonstruck
Ole Schmuck Luck is
a little awestruck
One day
Schmuck Luck and Moonstruck
go to a potluck
Schmuck Luck gets
sick and upchucks
Moonstruck is
a little dumbstruck
Cause Schmuck Luck
upchucked a woodchuck
Now ole Schmuck Luck
goes and sits in a hammock
Cause his stomach feels
yuck, yuck
Ole Schmuck Luck looks down
Discovers
he’s
upchucked on his new mukluks
Now ole Moonstruck is
a little thunderstruck
When she sees ole Schmuck Luck stompin’
around on the
tussock
What ya doin’ Schmuck Luck?
Cleanin’ off my mukluks
Cause I upchucked a woodchuck
Now this story could go on and on
The only thing I’ve learned
Don’t try to rhyme Schmuck Luck
Cause in the end you’re going to get
stuck, stuck
Cause your mind is once again running
amuck muck,
schmuck, schmuck.

Bonnie J. aka Bon-Bon


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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-07-04 11:59 AM


well, good morning my friend...sending smiles your way, you are a master at tongue twisters...sending good thoughts and dreams come true your way.  
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-07-04 12:04 PM


LOL Well bless yer little old sole--I mean "soul"! This was write--I mean "right"--funny!

Love & Laughter,
EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (07-04-2003 01:05 PM).]

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3 posted 2003-07-05 12:19 PM


Absolutely delightful!
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