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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA 
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Love’s words crested Resolve was tested Patience was bested Time was ingested Thoughts were nested The flowers rested Searching for the detested No one was invested Was god vested Was the world wrested From a bested love invested detested? [This message has been edited by Goodknight (07-01-2003 08:03 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh Paul! Excellent! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic write Paul!  So good to read your words. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
What in Heaven's name are you trying to do? Make my mind, once rested, be tested by what you have invested? And if this blasted repetetive injested, infested, wretched sound doesn't leave my mind, I think it will be suggested that I take a leave of absence... PS...great write.. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Woo- you wrung that one out! Well done, my friend. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
--and on the seventh day, the Flowers rested...  But , I digress!--I'll digest the rest later! LOL Huggums, EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Jiminy! *G* I'm glad I never had to memorize this for elocution... I'd still be untangling my tongue. LOL But I certainly did enjoy. *G* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Paul...Don't know the answer, but the questions were interesting to play and say, today.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well, now that i have my tongue back in tact...good write! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Paul, I just love this monorhyme, sweet friend, I think you certainly bested this poem as you always go full throttle in honesty and heart! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Goodknight - great write and use of the same rhyming words... BC |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ouch! Now that my tongue is untangled though my thoughts are still somewhat mangled and my nerves are thorougly jangled by this work that is forthright and spangled I hope that this styling new fangled is not the main type that is wrangled or else you may find yourself strangled and with some handcuffs be bangled :P~~~~~ My brain hurts from reading your work. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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TasteOfOctober Member
since 2003-06-24
Posts 94 |
lol, i love this, and i love how happy it made evreyone, lots of lols eh? lol. regardlkess, great piece. The only difference between the creative and the conformists is that the creative will not be conquered and the conformists already are. |
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