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Hockeychick19
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0 posted 2003-07-01 11:25 AM


My mind races,
My heart can’t keep up the pace,
Emotions flow through,
And they are only for you.

It doesn’t matter to me whether if you see it or not,
Or if you feel it,
Feel it or not,
I’m falling,
Falling in love with you.

You have no idea,
Of course that’s my biggest fear,
To be set a side,
To be rejected,
And lose all my pride.

It doesn’t matter to me whether if you see it or not,
Or if you feel it,
Feel it or not,
I’m falling,
Falling in love with you.

We are miles apart,
But you’ll always have my heart,
You’ve had it from the start,

It doesn’t matter to me whether if you see it or not,
Or if you feel it,
Feel it or not,
I’m falling,
Falling in love with you.

It doesn’t matter to me whether if you see it or not,
Or if you feel it,
Feel it or not,
I’m falling,
Falling in love with you.

© Copyright 2003 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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1 posted 2003-07-01 11:34 AM


nice writing...i know all too well about love..thank you for the great words..

Goldenrose.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-07-01 01:31 PM


it's a nice feeling, ey?
Hockeychick19
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3 posted 2003-07-01 05:14 PM


I have to say that feeling this way is wonderful. The one thing that bothers me though is that I don't think he feels the same way. :-(

~Kelly~

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