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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-07-01 04:02 PM



sister of mine
sister of mine
i will love you all
through time.

you been there with me
when i was down.
your the one that
turns it around.

fights and yells
screams and holler's
your more then a sister
to me. i feel like im
your own daughter.

great at everything you do
with care and love. i wish
i was like you. that is what
i want to be when i grow up.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-07-01 04:09 PM


very nice write,,, i'm sure your sister will enjoy....

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2003-07-01 04:18 PM


Thanks im kinda nervous to give it to her. i don't think its good enough. but then im always saying that about my stuff. im a perfectionist. hehe

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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