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Magnus
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0 posted 2003-06-29 03:46 PM


Forgive me if this is a little long.

I thought about you Father, as I lay down that cup, those
seemingly “cheap” trinkets upon the table.  And as I thought,
tears came, my lips quivered a little, I sighed.

I thought about those lads, not any older than you.  You know
them, their masculinity hiding behind boyish eyes and a grin
that melts steel, let alone hearts.  You knew them all, they
were part of your life then, back when bullets were free,
particularly those being shot at you.

I saw you there, your manly chest, so matted with that dark
suit of manly armor, wondering if I would ever look
nearly as manly as you, as they...still boys by comparison
to now, walking that rickety road of the elderly as you,
beside me climb our hills together.

Names of “Goff”, “TJ”, and others scrawled upon those
black and white memories of a war, when souls were slain
by the second and screams were still echoing in ears 50
years hence.   You still wonder where they are, all of them
that shared the nights with you, whether on the rolling decks
of gray steel or the cobbled street of some place
where a dime got you almost the night...

You flew that flag then, you know which one.  The one
you guys spilled your life for.  So many of them,  
arriving daily on somber ships in their wooden beds.
Eternal rest remembered beyond infinity.

I cherish those pictures, each one that you have shown me
over half a century.  They are as much a part of me as
your shipmates were you.   I look at them and I smile.
Why smile at war?  Why?   Because each of you has
carried our freedom gallantly.  You may as well be
there beside those colonists, shivering in the cold, eating
gruel and much less.    All of you have done so much
to give, to preserve that which I have, which we have...

And, those “trinkets”.....  Costing me nothing but
a smile and returned respect to a fellow sailor, each of
them I lay in your withered hands with my love and
admiration for you as a father, a warrior and a fellow
sailor, for those trinkets are compliments of a Navy
that is most proud of you, of us.  

They are priceless to me...


[This message has been edited by Magnus (06-29-2003 03:49 PM).]

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david_strontium
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1 posted 2003-06-29 03:52 PM


That's very nice. Did your father fight in World War 2 or Vietnam?
Magnus
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2 posted 2003-06-29 03:59 PM


Thank you,  he served in the USN from 1943-1948.
A man deserving of more than I could
ever write of him.  We both served in the
Navy, though mine was later...1967-1992...

I picked up a few window stickers,  a coffee
cup and a couple of other things from the
local recruiting office...He will enjoy
these little trinkets...a small token of the love
and admiration I have for him...and all the
others that served with him

QjQ
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3 posted 2003-06-29 04:04 PM


very,,very nice "mag"
i enjoyed this write very much...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


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