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Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

0 posted 2003-06-27 06:49 PM

You weaken me,
to the point where
I'd split my veins
and bleed-
till there's nothing left.

And yet you'd leave me in an instant-
standing in the shadows.

I hear thunder but where's the rain?

you left me bleeding,
the wound will never heal

(not about me)

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-06-27 09:15 PM

And I thought I married Ebola.

Are you quite sure you are not a bitter 47 year old divorcee'?

*chuckle* I think we are going to get along just fine. I have to go do some housewifey stuff, but I'll drop you a line later tonight or tomorrow, k?

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

2 posted 2003-06-27 09:39 PM

I was afriad I wouldn't get response (I shoulda posted it in dark?) Thanks Ser, are you talking about the duet?I won't be here until tomorrow night, so you start it.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

3 posted 2003-06-27 09:52 PM

"You weaken me,
to the point where
I'd split my veins
and bleed-
till there's nothing left."

WOW!

I LOVE THAT! So powerful!

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

4 posted 2003-06-27 09:53 PM

Ah! i can always count on you for such moving poetry! yay for moving poetry!! lol great write

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

5 posted 2003-06-27 09:54 PM

Thanks

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-06-27 11:05 PM

Great write, I liked it.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-06-27 11:07 PM

nah nevermind dark let it breathe up here, loved this

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

8 posted 2003-06-27 11:13 PM

Wow, i dont need another drink to love this,ok I'll have another drink.but I love this.

Jason

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2003-06-27 11:16 PM

Wind, I really enjoyed this. Your writing just keeps getting better and better. hugs, Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

10 posted 2003-06-27 11:42 PM

short, but powerful emotions expressed--i enjoyed!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-06-28 12:25 PM

very powerful! love it!

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

12 posted 2003-06-28 08:00 PM

I appreciate you guys responding, this was perhaps a little too much for the openers to handle. I might migrate to dark #3... I'd probably fit in there better, but I have so many friends here. The only people I know in dark are LP and IndigoEve

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

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