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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-06-27 05:20 PM



We are joined by the
space between us.

Connected by nothing.

And even this...we
fill with our
presence.


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1 posted 2003-06-27 05:28 PM


Eric, so much in so few words.... always a pleasure to read you
Margherita
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2 posted 2003-06-27 05:54 PM


Gives me the idea of flowing into each other ...... and it's beautiful!
Love, Margherita

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3 posted 2003-06-27 05:56 PM


excellent... short concise and portrays the idea with perfection.
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4 posted 2003-06-27 06:23 PM


Perfect!  Not one word wasted,..excellent.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

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   you haven't been listening.~

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-06-28 06:27 AM


Ericc - Goddd . . . yes
beautiful to think of nothing
as something
xxoo

Margherita
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6 posted 2003-06-28 10:21 AM


Again: amazing! Oh to fill "nothing" with love!
Hugs. Margherita

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7 posted 2003-06-28 10:28 AM


just beautiful
AnamCara
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8 posted 2003-06-28 11:00 AM


...this limitless space
between our souls
guide us around the universe

and when we come to rest in silence
not even a thought
can fit within this moment

there is no Us
only...

~~~
Love,
Angela

[This message has been edited by AnamCara (06-28-2003 05:31 PM).]

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9 posted 2003-06-28 03:35 PM


I wish I'd written this.

Sometimes "Nothing" is everything.

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10 posted 2003-06-28 04:33 PM


A beautiful lesson; a wise observation; a warm and loving poem.

Wonderful write, my sweetest poet...

Thank you.

I love you,
Moca

[This message has been edited by cinnamongirl (06-28-2003 04:34 PM).]

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11 posted 2003-06-28 04:38 PM


So beautiful, Eric...as always  
Hugs  
Ethel

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12 posted 2003-06-28 07:34 PM


This one was riveting...
Excellent! TD

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13 posted 2003-06-28 07:38 PM


that's short, but very deep.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

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14 posted 2003-06-28 07:39 PM




(smiles) Oh Eric, this is beautiful, sweet friend, there is always nothing in-between but yet it feels like so much more! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

ecrivan
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15 posted 2003-06-28 07:40 PM


There are many things to think of with a title like this,,you have got other poets thinking and that is good


ethome
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16 posted 2003-06-28 07:52 PM


Bravo! Nicely said!
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17 posted 2003-06-28 07:59 PM



You ALWAYS get the other poets thinking...

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