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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2003-06-25 07:23 AM

Companionship woven fine with shared experiences
Trustworthiness and mutually supporting
A web of popular music, heartfelt communication
Shared words, the acceptance of a lack of
Dialogue, triumphs & disappointments
Instinct of intuition known, unknown exchanges
Looking outward in the same direction
The substance of life itself, intermingles with
my skin...staying with me together forever
like the caribbean
Bonding with romantic love, visiting in December
Romantic love alone leaps across all waves gifting
to remember...he wasn't there?
A pale filament weakly held together by distance
and a lightened hinge falling from the shadows
In the face of storms, what will bind the door?
Everytime he leaves....
It will not be permanent, but blown to the winds.
In all things, both good, bad and inbetween
He never knew it but I’ll always remember the
Way he made me feel about me, God, I wish it could
have been different.......but.....
He changed my life forever, and in that perhaps
is why.....

By Lee J.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-25 02:40 PM

very nicely written,, enjoyed...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2003-06-30 01:38 AM

"Everytime he leaves....
It will not be permanent, but blown to the winds.
In all things, both good, bad and inbetween
He never knew it but I’ll always remember the
Way he made me feel about me, God, I wish it could
have been different.......but.....
He changed my life forever, and in that perhaps
is why....."

this touches....I am saving this

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-07-01 12:59 PM

staying with me together forever
like the caribbean
Bonding with romantic love, visiting in December

Gosh Lee, this is so beautiful.

Your words are like a rhapsody, completing the missing that changes us forever.

A gem of poem to be treasured always.

Be well and thank you so much for this~

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