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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-06-30 06:56 PM



Vomit
spit me out
I know I can't taste good
all truth
no filler

Remember the face
of damnation
when he's
coming for you
in the back alleys
of lucid dream

Why must you play the old songs
till they are Musak's greatest hits
to fit your decaying sex life


I know you want to scream
quiet the voice
that once drove you
but now only seeks
to destroy you


You scream
I laugh
slice you up
slowly from the inside out

You can't kill me
for I am you
the damn pitiful excuse
you see in your
broken mirror

Does it frighten you
little mutant halfwit
Because it sure as hell
frightens me


Who am I?
You may ask
oh simple fool
I am the soul you locked
so many ages ago
till now

For I am breaking
your feeble defense
overwhelming your dying mind
and soon will control
you or take you to
Beelzebub's Brimstone swimming pool.

© Copyright 2003 Dan Mauro - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-06-30 07:46 PM


Interesting, kept me glued to my screen! Great write!
littlewing
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2 posted 2003-06-30 08:21 PM


*wicked grin*

all truth ... no filler

God how do you do this!!!!!
amazing Brad . . .
God I want to scream this!
xxoo  

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3 posted 2003-07-01 12:58 PM


you better be careful, or I'll make you listen to me read my poetry outloud

Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2003-07-01 07:46 AM


Dan,

Very nice work!

Susan

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5 posted 2003-07-01 09:04 AM


In the bible it says "To live you only have to die".Satan wants you to live so you can serve him.He is wise and patient.He knows life is short and he will get you eventualy.

paladin

....a knight without armor

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