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timothysangel1973
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0 posted 2003-06-20 12:30 PM



You cant see what's inside, I refuse to share that part of me.
I don't think you'd appreciate the scars, or the person I've come to be.

You see only a body, and a smile that I've trained exceptionally well.
To fool the world into thinking that I've escaped my inner hell.

I've known your kind before, how do you think I got the burns?
I've been naive in the past, carrying a heart that never learns.

I'm not pushing you away because I want too, but I have nothing to give.
Inside me lives a soul that hurts each time it lives.

Go ahead and say, what you think you must...
Wasting your time and effort, on a heart that can't yet trust.

I've spent too much time chasing shadows, only to find that they weren't real.
I need to be alone a while.Give this heart time to heal.

Honesty was what you wanted when we sat down tonight,
please don't take that tone...I don't have the energy to fight.

You don't know me well enough to love me.
But I love myself enough to know.

Sometimes you hang on, and sometimes you let go.

If you cant get rid of the skeletons in your closet, you'd best teach them how to dance.  George Bernard Shaw

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1 posted 2003-06-20 02:04 AM


"You don't know me well enough to love me.
But I love myself enough to know.

Sometimes you hang on, and sometimes you let go"

I am keeping this

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2 posted 2003-06-20 05:14 AM


awesome write...love the ending line there!
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-06-20 06:08 AM


"You don't know me well enough to love me."
I wish I could have told a few women this and cut them off at the pass...women that tell me they love me to quick are scary...I suppose I've scared a few myself...James

timothysangel1973
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4 posted 2003-06-20 10:26 PM


Thank You all for your kind words.......

I love being around here, it's food for the soul!!

And sweet words from my friends are the dessert!

Love You guys!!

Tima C.

Please visit my website:  www.southerncountrywebdesign.com/~heart/

And support the fight against Child Abuse, Domestic and Verbal Abuse.

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5 posted 2003-06-28 01:43 AM


terrific write,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


Foxyoasis
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6 posted 2003-06-28 02:09 AM


i loved this poem. do u mind if i share this with this guy im seeing? mabey then he will understand the way i am.

again my god this is so much like me. i wish only i could of thought of something this powerful and good to write.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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