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Open Poetry #27

Untold Future

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-06-23 10:24 PM

very amusing,very amusing
in every step i take
ever time i want to make
something go right,i know
that I'll always make a mistake

years go by pass and pass
just sitting back and
relaxing out here in the sun
time presses on like
yester years. still
i aquired no fear

still churing through
this mess of mine,wondering
when myself is going to lay
down the line.

till that time comes to
me ill just be sitting back
and letting things be.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

[This message has been edited by Foxyoasis (06-24-2003 11:45 AM).]

Joe Houck
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 324
california

1 posted 2003-06-23 10:34 PM

Very nice.
I liked how your words flowed.
Joe =)

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2003-06-23 10:36 PM

thanks

im glad you liked it,in all honesty i threw it together. feeling pretty aggervated so i wrote as always. hehe

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-24 04:50 AM

letting things be...a good thing to do

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

4 posted 2003-06-28 03:01 AM

expressing your self is a good thing,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

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