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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2003-06-18 04:53 AM


Hello, you look beautiful,please sit and except my rose, the meals is ready.

Let me put another log on the fire, the snow is getting worse.
The champagne is chilled,here let me pour it, nice and steady.

Your eyes are reflecting the candle on the table, the light flickers and dances in them, to your beauty a toast.

Hope you enjoy the food, please begin when you wish.
Your lips glisten, so glad i could be your host.

Leave things where they are, come, come and join me in front of the fire.
Would you like some more champagne? And perhaps  a chocolate?

Have i said you look great, let me kiss your soft lips and gather you in my arms.
Shall we go upstairs, i have filled the room with roses,after all it is getting late..!

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Black Swan
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on the moon
1 posted 2003-06-18 05:05 AM


lovely!!!!!!!!
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-06-18 05:09 AM


that is so romantic! geez!
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2003-06-18 06:59 AM


Hello, and good evening, I kiss you on the cheek, for you are so sweet,Love your greeting, I have looked forwrd to our meeting all week,

Thank you,the rose is lovely, a symbol of love,

Oh, the snow is so beautiful outside,
Each snowflake reminds me, of every word of your poetry,

Each unique, and beautiful, glistening in the light, like your eyes I see tonight,

I see your smile, so warm and inviting, a toast!
The food was delicious, but I enjoyed your company the most,

Oh the fire is so romantic, like you, it makes me feel all warm and cozy inside,

Chocolate would be fine,
As I taste your lips devine,

Thank you, you look rather handsome yourself,Your arms is where I want to be, and not with anyone else,

Oh, how lovely, how romantic, rose petals on the floor, up the stairs and on the bed, you are so sweet, light the candle, rub my feet,I want to stay here with you instead!

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-18-2003 07:00 AM).]

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2003-06-19 12:40 PM


A perfect evening, indeed.
Love the romance Goldenrose~

Goldenrose
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5 posted 2003-06-20 11:54 AM


thank you everybody for your kind words.


Goldenrose.


littlewing
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6 posted 2003-06-20 02:25 PM


lucky Lady Phil . . .
nice write too
xxoo

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