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Spying through Glass |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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An aura streams outside my window a glow adjacent to the warmth that penetrates coming closer in short breaths. Condensation forms in the clouds mysting droplets fall on my brow reflecting diamonds and blue sapphires. Soothed by a silken touch lifting my face toward the sky connecting the circle that separates us. We are one in the glory, set in white gold a luminous body dipping in cool water a vision, held under the suns bright corona. Our paradise with an ocean view tearing down walls, the door left wide open spying through glass. Exposing our dreams feather dusting the edges a vase filled with wild flowers. We lie sated and still fashioned in pink pastels risking the arch ~bending over a rainbow~ ~*~ |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Very pretty images.  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, Cool you can have the diamonds and I'll take the blue sapphires! But about that rainbow... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks alot for reading Skyshine~ Yea yea, I know, a rainbow sounds so cliche. It's about the vision, and a sight to behold. Thanks Larry~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
No, sorry. I was wondering if we had to share it!  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
For you...I would hand the pot of gold over in a second, if only I could reach that far.  Larry, Larry~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (06-12-2003 01:52 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Exposing our dreams feather dusting the edges a vase filled with wild flowers. We lie sated and still fashioned in pink pastels risking the arch ~bending over a rainbow~ Lori, this is just the most beautiful poem. You painted the picture so well, that my mind's eye could see it so clearly...and it is beautiful!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sparkles like the prism which such thoughts reflect. Steaming creativity!! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice imagery... and some nice feelings in this... Since you and Larry can't decide on the rainbow..you guys take the gems, I'll take the rainbow.. lol...and any pot of gold at the end..well, we can divide. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - rainbows, I love them. Nice write... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A serenade with all the colors of the rainbow...Simply divine, Dear Blue!  Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Exposing our dreams feather dusting the edges a vase filled with wild flowers. We lie sated and still fashioned in pink pastels risking the arch ~bending over a rainbow~ Nothing cliched at all in something this beautiful. *G* For while y'all argue over all the gems and gold... I'll take the poetry. *G* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful Lori! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Many thanks for all your nice replies. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
This ocean view appeals to me too. Very nice. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Lovely......aaaaaaaaaaah that's a sigh aaaaaaaah not a Aaaaaaaaaaah!!! what's that thing on Raph's neck..oh nevermind it's his face! kind of aaaaaaahhhh [This message has been edited by Aenimal (06-12-2003 09:23 PM).] |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
this is damn good,what's it mean to you. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"Soothed by a silken touch lifting my face toward the sky connecting the circle that separates us." Great stuff! It reminded me of a summer in Monteray. Thank you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bluesy you have done it once again . . . this is beautiful the droplets . . . goodness leaving my mind to wander which is not a good thing lol This write is from ink and feather . . . xxoo tweets |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Exposing our dreams feather dusting the edges a vase filled with wild flowers. We lie sated and still fashioned in pink pastels risking the arch ~bending over a rainbow~ A poem within a poem....I'm glad I decided this morning to go looking for things I'd missed == I missed a beauty. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
silky...James |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori..."Risking the arch"...what a wonderful way of putting it! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very creative, beautiful words. Sandra |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Absolutely beautiful I love the images this gave me, thank you It is said the Creator has taken a handful of South Wind and given each newborn Arabian the power of flight without wings |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you for reading my softer side everyone ....and to you too Mr. Ratleader for bumping this up. You surprised me, you did. Many hugs all around~ |
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