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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2003-05-26 11:19 PM


In the distance the thunder claps
The lightning lights up the dark sky
The clouds roll closer and closer
The wind starts to whip up

You can hear the rain pouring
In the distance
Slowing creeping to where you live

Now the thunder is right over your house
The lightning lights up your room
The wind makes the tree branches
Scrape against your window
The rain is pounding the ground
The storm has arrived

Now you drift off to sleep
As the storm rages outside

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Edder
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1 posted 2003-05-26 11:25 PM


i've spent enough nights on Amelia Island to know exactly what you speak of. enjoyed
ecrivan
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2 posted 2003-05-26 11:27 PM


freaky weather changes occur...where will it all go?...nice account


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3 posted 2003-05-26 11:30 PM


LONER'S BACK! YESSSSS!!!!! I knew this was gonna be a good day!

And a nice one to come back with, moving out a bit into new pastures. Good to see ya, kid!

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4 posted 2003-05-26 11:32 PM


I love a good storm too. (It's the really bad ones that scare the hell outta me.)

Welcome home Julie.

Good to have you back.

ThunderMage
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5 posted 2003-05-26 11:36 PM


The thunder is my heart beating when I think about you.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

skyshine
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6 posted 2003-05-26 11:52 PM


I love storms!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Startime55
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7 posted 2003-05-26 11:54 PM


BEAUTIFUL....I LOVE STORMS...THIS POEM BROUGHT ONE TO LIFE FOR ME...BRAVO!!!

passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-05-27 03:02 AM


love this!
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