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Aenimal
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0 posted 2003-05-25 06:55 PM


My appreciation
of Life is learned
in the darkness

In the beginning
there was dark
before light

Suffering it seems
defines in its roundabout way
all that is worth living for

As vital to
human existence
as air or water

Its in the
break of heart
the agony of defeat
that a soul
is tempered

To know this is a step
To live this is release

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Martie
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1 posted 2003-05-25 06:59 PM


Aenimal

"Its in the
break of heart
the agony of defeat
that a soul
is tempered"

I believe this is true.

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2003-05-26 12:57 PM


Haven't we all been in the dark,
whether we welcome it or not.
It's when we find our way out, that
we have come full circle.

None the less, I always enjoy your dark side.  


passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-05-26 02:28 AM


suffering...that's what it's all about
Mysteria
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4 posted 2003-05-26 03:01 AM


In order to appreciate the true beauty of the light you must first sit in absolute darkness, and this you do so well.
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-05-26 09:29 AM


You have such a unique way of looking at the world and I always find your writing fascinating.

Warm hugs,
Linda

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6 posted 2003-05-26 03:57 PM


The alchemist writes.


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7 posted 2003-05-26 06:17 PM



Aenimal
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8 posted 2003-05-26 08:38 PM


Thanks Martie i think its the only time we learn anything

Definitely Blues and this is the reason it exists

Dix you got it

Thank you Mysteria hoping to start appreciating the light a little more..ugh i hate that word..hope

Linda thanks I'm glad you feel that way

Grin thanks K, I turn lead into aluminium..nevermind bad joke

Kacy you spooked me I thought the colors were the meds ..thanks


littlewing
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9 posted 2003-05-26 11:04 PM


lol @ your reply to K - I thought it was funny . . . But then again - I would heh

Trust me on this . . .still in the dark- probably will be for a long time but one day (that word you despise) will shine through - I do belive that - for all of us and I dont hope it - I know it . . .

Smiling here again at your gifts . . .
xxoo

serenity blaze
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10 posted 2003-05-26 11:07 PM


I thought it was funny too...but? rumor has it I'm "easy".

Was wondering if you ever caught that flick, "The Tao of Dave"--quite funny, but not without insight.

also, where is brian madden? You two would get along famously!

ecrivan
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11 posted 2003-05-26 11:09 PM


good to read this and extract the truism from
it.

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (05-26-2003 11:09 PM).]

Aenimal
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12 posted 2003-05-26 11:28 PM


Sue no more one day's

K haven't seen it yet but that's what inspired the title..was thinking about that movie and thought well what's the tao of me..

thanks you kindly ecrivan..go habs go..

snowpants
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13 posted 2003-05-27 02:34 AM


"Its in the
break of heart
the agony of defeat
that a soul
is tempered"

As much as we don't want to hear this, it is so true...very good lines...

sp

I want to wake up to the sound of waves
crashing on a brand new day;
keep the memory of your face
but wipe the pain away...

Krawdad
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14 posted 2003-05-27 02:51 AM


Hmmmmmmm
Seems to be a lot of this goin around these days . . .

. . . but light was the beginning.
We pull the darkness over our heads . . .

Kraw'

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