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Defeated Cowards
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Defeated Cowards |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. 
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Defeated Cowards Warriors weep as sheep, yellow down their backs. Rearward stumbling, falling. Torn, worn, wishing not born. Bludgeoned, slashed, gashed, lay bloody on their backs. Cowards, traitors, defeated. It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Gee. I can think of many things to say. But I'll only say cowards are defeated before they even go into battle. Of course, they usually don't, though, do they. They let others do it for them and reap the rewards. Interesting write. Certainly makes me think. Hugs, Pat  |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
a person can turn coward in battle and run!! think!!! It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
That doesn't make them a coward, it makes them human. They showed up, didn't they? Hugs, interesting write.... Pat |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
when in battle one does not turn back and run it's fight to death, or be a coward or at least in this writers beliefs it is!!! thanks for your remarks It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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