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LastMoments
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0 posted 2003-05-11 10:34 PM



Just when I lent my trust in you
It turned to its side to faint
And die away inside and out
Withered like crumpled paper

It blows away inside the wind
Shedding its final pieces
To the eyes of the unknowns
The has-beens, and the failures

You enlit my eyes, scarring them
Abused by lies, and luring them
Are you content now that you take
The last breaths I have and throw them away

Entrapped by everything I have
My shelter abused and sending me
To this place I call beyond
To this place no one can find

I take myself away from it all...
I take myself away from you

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-05-11 10:57 PM


feelings expressed well

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-05-12 04:11 AM


I know how you feel...I do that too...but who hurts worse?
Justbleu
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3 posted 2003-05-12 03:48 PM


Very sad....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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