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Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
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0 posted 2003-05-11 01:34 PM


Send me your voice on the telephone
That’s all I need to receive
Please tell me your dreams, and I’ll tell you mine
The charges are no cost to me

Down in the very depths of my soul
The river was dark and doomed
You brought the light into my world
As though there’s no cost to you

What’s everybody so worried about
Operator, what is the question
My ears are ringing, please clear the line
This might be my only connection

Do you have a joy, a worry, a doubt
Just call me, I’ll say it out loud
Assurance I wish to lend to your heart
Love at no cost is what we’re about

So call me up, love, and let’s share a prayer
One that our hearts can retrieve
What does it cost if you really believe
Call me up, collect what you need


© Copyright 2003 Kahlil - All Rights Reserved
Startime55
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Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2003-05-11 01:36 PM


*clapping* Well done...I hope you get your call...

Kahlil
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2 posted 2003-05-11 01:39 PM


ooooo, me too!  (giggle)
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-05-12 04:49 AM


wonderful! wow!
Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 2003-05-12 12:32 PM


Very very nice.....
I hope you get the call too!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2003-05-12 12:42 PM


Ring-a-ling! Ring-a-ling! Kahlil, there's someone on the line for you...  

Love & Hugs,
EA

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-05-12 12:45 PM


Oooh I love this!
Well done and much enjoyed!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
7 posted 2003-05-12 11:29 PM


Hello Kahlil

This was fabulously written and so much enjoyed.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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