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JingleBear
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0 posted 2003-05-08 07:59 PM



This is what happens when you have nothing to do
you start thinking of the times wasted through and through
not knowing how it will all be ended
your feelings may never be mended

This is what happens when your dark skies will not turn to blue
your days feel numbered and few
nothing is changing
only your thoughts are raging

This is what happens when you know it's true
all emotions have been drained from you
do not live in guilt
for they can surely be rebuilt

This is what happens when there is not a clue
as to why your life is far over due
shall you smoke that joint
you still will not get the point

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-05-08 08:02 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is such a sad truth, sweet friend, it saddens me to see people destroy their soul and body like that when truly there are so many far less fortunate than those are, who truly are oppressed and exiled and that is the response they choose to make! This is a powerful debut, sweet friend, I am zero-tolerant and always will be! Welcome to Passions, sweet JingleBear, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your poignant poetry, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

JingleBear
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2 posted 2003-05-08 10:32 PM


Thank you! I am looking forward to learning more. Does anyone have any suggestions?
passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-05-09 05:34 AM


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Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-05-09 10:44 AM



Welcome to Passions!  You're asking for suggestions, but to what?  I'm sure you'll get a ton of responses once we know your desires.  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-05-09 10:50 AM


Well, I welcomed you in your other poem because I didn't see this one. But, I'd like to say welcome again and I hope that you like it here.

"To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin
~with heart hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

Justbleu
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6 posted 2003-05-09 10:57 AM


Welcome To Passions!!!!


Hope you like it here....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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