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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2003-05-07 06:34 PM


Storm Chaser

I must be
a storm chaser
why else would
I behave this way
pulled to a force
of disturbance
that excites
and electrifies all pores
an assault
of my emotion
penetrating commotion
squalls down
wind changing
calm to tempest
rain on me,
rain on me
swirling jets
of thunder clouds
for when
the dust settles
I find
a new creation



© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-05-07 06:42 PM



That's exactly
what a good storm
will do...
create a new
anything...

but most especially
beginnings.

Ericc
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2 posted 2003-05-07 06:54 PM


There is heat in a storm...and a cleansing afterwards.
You words strike deeply.
Eric

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3 posted 2003-05-07 08:04 PM


Wanna start a club?



I could so relate to this!

ptwils165
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4 posted 2003-05-07 08:23 PM


yes,

something swept me up here.

pete.

Alan
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5 posted 2003-05-07 08:36 PM


A beautiful read that I for one can relate.
alan

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6 posted 2003-05-08 09:43 AM


A little humor, a lot of insight....I like that very much.


::::serenity -- can I join your club?

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7 posted 2003-05-08 12:19 PM


I wanted to see some of those yesterday. . .

great work helen. . .

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scorpio
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8 posted 2003-05-08 12:27 PM



A good storm terrifies and holds us in awe at the same time...well done, Helen..

believe in what your heart feels...

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9 posted 2003-05-08 12:31 PM


awesome write, ladybug

you know I'm with ya

icebox
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10 posted 2003-05-08 12:34 PM


I'll tell you a secret:  I have been known to go outside at the height of a hurricane and play my echo harp (a type of harminica) in the storm.  It absolutely is a fatal attraction!  I LOVE IT!!!!
Thank you for setting it to verse.

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11 posted 2003-05-08 02:04 PM


I love what you've done with this.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

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12 posted 2003-05-09 11:46 PM


Good write. I know exactly what you mean.
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13 posted 2003-05-09 11:54 PM






(big hugggssssssss) That is the true benefit of storms, nothing is ever the same afterward them and even when there is always risk of destruction and distortion, sometimes it is better off when you want reform! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shien upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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