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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2003-05-07 10:31 AM


the escapist lives a never-satisfied dream
of
   wanting
               to
                  be
                      somewhere
                                       else
                                             always
and he is forever climbing down
from his steps of assumed miseries
into another definition of depth

but some escapists are also dreamers
of
   fantastic
                and
                      expansive
                                     beauties
and they are wide-eyed butterflies
exotic, bright and colourfully hued
fluttering in their forever dips

--------
did i write that?

© Copyright 2003 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-05-07 10:34 AM


colors...it is all about colors... and you have shown us yours...

I enjoyed

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-05-07 10:36 AM


WOW!!!  Beautiful!
Love the 'steps' as well...
You do continue to soar Sudhir!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Justbleu
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3 posted 2003-05-07 10:37 AM


Ahh...very nice!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


littlewing
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4 posted 2003-05-07 12:03 PM


Sudhir - yes you did write it
and glad you did

know this feeling well. my friend
xxoo

BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2003-05-07 12:15 PM


This is a great escape in every sense of the word, a dream within dream.

I enjoy your writing so much Sudhir~

Sunshine
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6 posted 2003-05-07 12:30 PM


did [you] write this?

~*~

here's wishing I had...

regards2you
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7 posted 2003-05-07 12:46 PM




Sudhir,

Such a talented poet. I love this.
Hugs, Pat


scorpio
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8 posted 2003-05-07 12:50 PM


Well done...much enjoyed..
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9 posted 2003-05-07 01:12 PM


Wonderful! wonderful writing Sudhir!
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10 posted 2003-05-07 01:58 PM


Very nicely done indeed !! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

j-oh-E
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11 posted 2003-05-07 02:18 PM


I liked reading this one out loud.  Excellent!

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12 posted 2003-05-07 03:37 PM



This colorful escapee from your quill is great!

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13 posted 2003-05-07 04:21 PM


SudhirMyFriend~

'some escapists are also dreamers'

I think you just painted ME ~

Lovely thoughts, dear poet~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Martie
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14 posted 2003-05-07 05:50 PM


Sudhir...A meaningful poem, colored with deep thought.  
quatro
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15 posted 2003-05-07 06:24 PM


I enjoyed this.  Nice work.

quatro

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16 posted 2003-05-07 11:20 PM




(smiles) Oh Sudhir, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you truly ar eone of these butterflies that have monarch freckled smiles that can bring smiles to any flower! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is delightful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Sudhir Iyer
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17 posted 2003-05-08 03:57 AM


to escape from the world of work
is to work the world of words
and to relax in the knowing
that our words have the small
                        slender chance
to bring peace, serenity and meaning
to atleast a few readers
-----------------

thank you all for your magnificently kind remarks... for your time, for your much appreciated thoughts... for your beauty...

regards,
sudhir


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