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Composition of Color (Dream Me Blue)
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Composition of Color (Dream Me Blue) |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Include me in grey places Where purity of white Is mixed with absolutes of black To create the color Cruel I can laugh at myself For dreaming But can you curse me For the same? No palette should be bereft The gracing blues and reds Or even green to swipe across The places brown Yet, When it is in black or white We paint Those shades have no place To reside No warmth to impart I’ll paint you nude Naked to match the feel Of raw on umber dreams But blur the lines With shades of grey So that no hard edged Eyes will judge You as ugly As I When I dared To dream A color Now Blue |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I’ll paint you nude Naked to match the feel Of raw on umber dreams But blur the lines With shades of grey So that no hard edged Eyes will judge You as ugly As I ...... this has such a brilliant feel to it... great work, Ron... you keep writing and we will keep on reading...  regards, sudhir |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pat yourself on the back and kiss the mirror for me! That was brilliant!  Rainbow wishes, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Captain..you may paint me any colour of the rainbow! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A palette of color... even though sometimes I think you hug the gray... brilliantly done, Sir... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron Ouch..to create the color, cruel...I'm passing you my paint set...only you've got to paint one color at a time...when you mix them together they come out ugly. Hugs! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sud..my friend.. thank you kindly for the nice words..glad you enjoyed.. EA.. kissing mirrors is a cold affair.. I'd prefer something warmer and more alive.. but thank you for the nice words... Nancy... now there is an invitation, should we finger paint or would you prefer a brush? LOL... thank you dear friend. Sunshine.. thank you for the kind words.. the grey... ah well.. I perhaps am just comfortable there. Martie.. (chuckling) I flunked all art classes... seems I always made ugly... thanks to you for dropping in and the words. [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (05-07-2003 10:31 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I liked your first verse especially, not to mention that the color blue is rather becoming on you cpat. It is sad that our dreams are so short lived. Be well~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
not to mention that the color blue is rather becoming on you cpat. LOL... Blues... I think blue suits me almost as well as grey... now whether it is becoming on me or not.. I'll let others judge. thanks for dropping in my friend..and the words you left. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~I’ll paint you nude Naked to match the feel Of raw on umber dreams But blur the lines With shades of grey So that no hard edged Eyes will judge You as ugly As I~ WOW, Loved the whole read and especially these lines......great piece you wrote here!! ((hugs)) Charisma |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ron, For being such a lousy painter as you state in replies, you sure do know a lot about colors. This is by far one of my favorites of yours.... at least for today... I really, really do like this. Hugs, Pat |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Charisma... glad you enjoyed..and thank you for not only dropping y to read but taking time to comment.. it is appreciated. Pat... LOL.. I am a lousy painter.. and a lousy artist. I can't even draw good stick figures. as for colors... they are all around us, you don't have to paint to see them and in some way no matter how small understand them.. thanks for taking the time to read..and leave your thoughts. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You know, There is much to be said in the gray of black and white. An enchanting piece, to read again, many times. Liked this. TD |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
TD... thank you ma'am... if it gave pleasure once it is enough but to be read again or looked at some day not yet here and enjoyed is perhaps the highest honor any of us could hope for.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Include me in grey places Where purity of white Is mixed with absolutes of black To create the color Cruel I can laugh at myself For dreaming But can you curse me For the same? No palette should be bereft The gracing blues and reds Or even green to swipe across The places brown Yet, When it is in black or white We paint Those shades have no place To reside No warmth to impart I’ll paint you nude Naked to match the feel Of raw on umber dreams But blur the lines With shades of grey So that no hard edged Eyes will judge You as ugly As I When I dared To dream A color Now Blue[/b] =============================== *speechless moth* .... somebody play me a song .... There's not enough of me well, there's way too much of you I think I saw some happy people yesterday and that'll never do There's never too much violence, ain't it time we had a war These are violent times, and I only want to do my part To sink to hatreds depths, and smile at what we've all become Chorus: I need understanding, just a pack or two To help me with my troubles, and what to do's I don't feel no raging, there ain't nothing new Drop me in the ocean, and paint me blue From Paint Me Blue Tabitha's Secret (Rob Thomas)  |
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