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Devoured
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
I had a dream that pierced like iron-red roared when the anvil, struck and sunk deep the cloud From high above I could see drops fall and begin to soak the ground above my love that felt like fire consumed me devoured till flesh and bone alone were hers Here i'll stand forever until the rains quench all desire and the flood, the rising flood grows to meet the lonely my one my only fire Rf |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice write, i liked the ending It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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davidmerriman Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 123Dallas, TX |
...and i liked the beginning. A nice write, i would expand upon it |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A friend of mine describes this as the mother of all trucks... He isn't a poet, but should be. Understood the melody lifting this write, and enjoyed. TD |
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