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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Treasured the touch as moist lips kiss in moments measured by torrid bliss. Of honeysuckle vintage wine as traces leave a curving line. The taste savored by each one night of tongues that clash ever so light. Of waiting highs and tremulous sighs, glistening eyes ‘pon moonlit skies. The bounty shared at rainbow’s end upon the grass of forest’s glen. The frolic and dance on fresh dew as breezes twirl and swirl anew. Lightly the breath shall flow between the melded drops in lover’s sheen. As hands entwine the dance shall end at Romance Ball round river’s bend. [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-01-2003 09:41 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A pretty write...reminds me of the harvest ball...lovers slipping away to discover moonlight for the first time. Gee...not bad! Smiles from TD |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Lovely to read you on this quiet night~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes Barry..a wondeful rainy night to read you...this...beautiful piece.. This poem which causes me to emit tremulous sighs!  Well done and oh so softly spoken poet sir. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Lovely write, so very well flowing and beautiful imagery. I am a moon child I love this one  Julie |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Barry, This is simply lovely and reads so smoothly...nice to reread for the pleasure of it... Enjoyed, Pat |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Oh my gosh...this is one vision that needs to be fulfilled...Stunningly captivating....I lost myself in the romance and beauty of this magnificent dance.....I LOVE IT... |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Magnus, you write of erotica so tastefully! (No pun intended |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
The flow is exquisite! Such talent... Great Job! Richy |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - you romantic you... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your poem glistens! Very beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus Well done my friend you got the ladies with this one. Enjoyed |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry...Wonderful to know, that romance is still alive and very well! Loved this! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*swept off my feet* |
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