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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-04-30 10:16 AM


“ONE ROSE OF RED”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I handed you a rose with
petals soft that reminds me
of nights passion when I
caress your being, and
I hear you sigh whispers
of delight knowing of
them inside me…

A rose chosen from a garden
of bouquets, with the same
fragrance of you that tempts
me into desires when we
embrace, and skin touches
the warmth of skin…

One rose of red, a gift of
loves mystery given under an
enchanting moon to one fair, as
we join in tenderness,
and I feel the fires
burning with you…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Justbleu
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1 posted 2003-04-30 10:22 AM


Oh this is sooo nice.....
Enjoyed!!!!!
Bridgette

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2 posted 2003-04-30 10:46 AM




(smiles) Oh Bill, this is lovely, sweet friend, all your wonderful words always make me smile and may you always caress your loves lips with the rose and have your heart skip beats humming loves blessing! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-04-30 11:30 AM


Wonderful Bill..very beautiful!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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4 posted 2003-04-30 11:47 AM


BillCharles~
This one *sighssssssssssss* of loveliness~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Gnubbin
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since 2003-04-29
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5 posted 2003-04-30 12:08 PM


well done, you show your feelings
presented in picturesque imagery
and a pleasant read

Gnub

there ain't no lovin'
like Gnub Gnubbin's lovin'

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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MA, USA
6 posted 2003-05-01 12:03 PM


Bill...WOW!!! This is exceptionally beautiful like the one you hand the red rose to. Very passionate and romantic all at the same time. Your imagery is captivating.

***Ivy Rose

Patricia
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Missouri
7 posted 2003-05-01 06:57 AM


Well, BC, I shouldn't read your poetry before I have to go to work.  It makes it  too hard to focus on what I need to accomplish.  I keep thinking of romance and the sweetness of love.  I will have to start reading you in the evening for sure.

-Patricia

Margherita
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8 posted 2003-05-01 07:13 AM


Dear Bill, this is so full of charm ... you have some tender heart man!
The rose's scent is spreading out to the reader.
Love, Margherita

garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-05-01 07:33 AM


Oh yes, Bill...
This romantic  LOVES  this one.
I love roses.  
Hugs,
Ethel

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10 posted 2003-05-01 08:42 AM


Ah... this is so romantic! A great write!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Honeybee
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11 posted 2003-05-01 10:17 AM



Add my sighs to the list...as always Bill you write lovely romance!   I really enjoyed this one.

Take care,
Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
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Alberta, Canada
12 posted 2003-05-01 10:40 AM



Passionate and sensual, written with tenderness.

Well done.

CG

littlewing
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New York
13 posted 2003-05-02 06:00 PM


Bill:

hoping that you receive that rose
in return . . .

This is beautiful
xxoo

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