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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-04-24 08:13 PM

The day has been terrible
The one you love
Is away again
And decides he will stay away
The whole intire day

You try to take a bath
But it is ruined
When your mom says,
"I have to go
Hurry up."
Which makes your relaxing bath
End not so relaxing

Sunset on a sad day
How much worse can it get
I say
Hopefully not too much
I just wish it was a happy day

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

1 posted 2003-04-24 08:51 PM

....sunset means the day's over....means evening....which also means that if he shows up now you can torture him to your heart's content.....

Do so immediately!

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whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

2 posted 2003-04-24 09:00 PM

Hopefully tommorrow will be a happier day for you.

Julie

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

3 posted 2003-04-24 11:09 PM

I adore you Julie.

You'll always be my angel.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2003-04-25 12:50 PM

hmmmm .... thought provoking!
Well, the decision to take a relaxing bath was perfect ... do not let anyone ruin your days.
At least you noticed the sunset, which is always beautiful, even if you are sad.
See the chance to be happy right NOW.
Love, Margherita

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2003-04-25 01:43 PM

Each and every morning brings a fresh start....a new beginning. Smile! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

6 posted 2003-04-29 09:31 AM

Another hopefully better day will come with the sunrise.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2003-04-29 01:56 PM

As natural as it gets Julie...
Sunrise is breathtaking. TD

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-04-29 05:14 PM

enjoyed

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2003-04-29 05:50 PM

Loved your title Julie.(and used it in my poem about titles)

What's one day...should just make the heart grow fonder.
hugsss
M

Shlee
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 72
USA

10 posted 2003-04-30 10:44 AM

I understand days like that. Most of the time sunsets would be the highlight of my day but then there are times...

Very well written, I most certainly enjoyed.

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

11 posted 2003-04-30 11:20 AM

Rogue wishes you a Very HAPPY DAY

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