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Written With A Human Touch
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Written With A Human Touch |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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 Photo By Webshots ~~~*~~~ Some write with an air of classic with words like thou and thee Others write with simple words just saying you and me Some write their poems in free verse where words hardly ever rhyme Others write rhyme so fine and the rhythms in perfect time There are some of us who want their words in form with a count of lines These poems must have the syllables right for it on paper to look just fine But most of all please notice in poetry of every kind When thoughts are written direct from the heart a human touch written in you will find Now with that human touch in poems with love and care from the heart The reader will be in tune with the poem and feel the words right from the start ~~~*~~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-30-2003 01:56 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
That's so true ... the heart is always felt, whether there are rhymes or not. The language of the heart can't be ruled, I think and maybe shouldn't. Welcome freedom in poetry .... the one factor that counts is the heart. Love, Margherita  |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
It amazes me that we can know a person, their thoughts, feelings, passions, pains.. so well from their words here. And even without seeing their eyes  ..you've caught it right on.Even in poetry the diversity defines us.. as real! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Human touch...and a nice flow...my favorites...James |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
A poetic lesson...beautifuly told. Thanks. Eric |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Words so true and so beautifully written! Maree  |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
An excellent description. Thanks. I needed an uplifting this morning. Melton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Ethel! You put into words what is in my head! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, A lovely poem and I enjoyed the read.  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hooray Ethel. Great poem and fantastic photo! In my mind, poems written from the heart and soul are the very best. Hugs and Smiles on this glorious day ... Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dixie  . . Margherita . . Alyssa . . James . . I really thank all of you. I appreciate ya'll, too. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric . . Maree . . 2dalimit . . Nancy Lee . . Every one of you is so sweet. I appreciate that and thank all of you very much. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour . . Marti . . Two of my favorite heart writers. I thank both of you very much and appreciate ya'll, too. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, yes, it is that that makes poetry come alive and entice the senses, to feel, to cry, to laugh, to breathe, to dream, to live! (kiss on cheek) May we always suspense our senses and feel from the heart in all, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Ethel,great write I loved the flowers also Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ethel, You captured perfectly what poetry is about... Good write, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
garysgirl - how did you know I love roses? This is one of your best I've read... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
All of your poetry is written with a DIVINE touch! Warm hugs, dear Ethel, EA |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How well you explicate the talents, diverse and broad here...that collectively make this blue page so great. Smiles from TD. |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
I am feeling alot of LOVE in this one   Rogue |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Some of us write with what we've got, Which in some cases ain't to much but you've done a wonderful job, With quite the "human" touch... |
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