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Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-04-23 11:16 PM

I seek to forgive
But your shameless denial
Breeds bottomless rage

Gina Culliney
Member

since 2003-03-08

Posts 170

1 posted 2003-04-23 11:19 PM

Penned well, once again.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-04-23 11:27 PM

Rage is such a waste of energy,
unlike moodswings that subside eventually.
I could feel the pain in your words and I'm sorry.

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

3 posted 2003-04-23 11:37 PM

forgiveness should be about yourself not done for the person you wish to forgive, its a way of moving past wrong doings done to ourselves.

Julie

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2003-04-24 12:24 PM

oooh, powerful pain within, hope it eases and isn't really bottomless.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-04-24 12:38 PM

Jason, this one does hurt. Denial can
be a very hurtful thing.
Best wishes to you.
Hugs,
Ethel

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-04-24 05:02 AM

yes! it's just like that, isn't it?

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2003-04-24 05:31 AM

Tough words, forgive anyway!
Rendered well!
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2003-04-24 06:43 AM

Forgiving is one thing...does that mean you have to still hang around with them...I don't think so...James

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2003-04-24 10:17 AM

I thought as I read this...
Healing can not occur while the wound is opened.
Well done. TD

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2003-04-24 10:32 AM

Forgiveness is a gift you give to yourself.
I am sorry that your rage is denying you that divine present.

May all be soon well in your world,
EA

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

11 posted 2003-04-24 11:34 AM

you use your few words very well!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

12 posted 2003-04-24 11:38 AM

Jason - awesome write here
and I do know this wanting to forgive
in the face of lies . . .

xxoo

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

13 posted 2003-04-24 11:52 PM

I'm going to print this on xmas cards and send this to a few people i know lol

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

14 posted 2003-04-25 11:42 AM

forgive and move forward...
it's much less painful to the heart

a good write, Jason

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

15 posted 2003-04-25 01:50 PM

Underneath the rage is usally sadness.....one emotion builds upon the other....if we wait to forgive and move on. Well done. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

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