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Wonderment |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Riding on air I am mired in the billowy clouds Enduring the rollercoaster ride That disrupts my slumber The silvery moon Shining so bright With beams kissing the ground Lay off to my left The sky bursting with color Fades to my right Magenta to blue Blue to yellow Leads me to wonderment As the dots below rush past Amongst the dark expanse That time seems to have forgotten Wearily I go forward As I taste the fruit of the vine And sample the meager offerings That diminish daily I think of the challenges The ways in which I can return To the shore with frothy foam And big bridges to bring us together Where once again Our lips will meet And we share our secrets And be friends, once again |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Not one reply.....Guess this wasnt up to par so I will try harder the next time....but where did I fail? |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I like this....did the friend whose lips met yours start you riding on air in the first place? I like the imagery... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Hope you don't base the quality of your poetry on the number of replys!!! I enjoyed this.... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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