here is one more that is close to my heart

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Open Poetry #26

here is one more that is close to my heart

Seraphine
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since 2003-04-24

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0 posted 2003-04-24 09:49 PM

Could I lift my wings to heaven
and rest there on a cloud
Soar the depths of blue
and kiss the melting fire
muse at great heights
and spend my nights with you

sharing with you all that I have seen
from endless peace to guilded flame
and coming back to you once more
with feather fleeced locks of hair
and the memory of a dream

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

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1 posted 2003-04-24 10:14 PM

interesting write,

"one needs not challenge all the players to win the game"

Seraphine
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since 2003-04-24

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2 posted 2003-04-24 10:19 PM

thanks for responding

that one is called Feather Fall. I forgot to put the title in.

Mary Ann
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since 2003-04-23

Posts 111

3 posted 2003-04-24 11:35 PM

This is a beautiful poem

I like the mystical feel to it..

God bless,

Mary Ann

Seraphine
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since 2003-04-24

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4 posted 2003-04-24 11:38 PM

Thank you Mary Ann

I look foward to reading your work!

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-04-28 04:32 PM

Indeed, this does have a seraphic quality...
very nice, and if you would like the title put in, just let me know. I can do that for you!

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

6 posted 2003-04-28 04:35 PM

This is quite nice....
An interesting piece!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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