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RSWells
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0 posted 2003-04-17 06:40 PM




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Blue-purple shadow wait,
delay your sidelong skitter
to the feast,
your appetite abate,
have patience till life quits
and breath is ceased

Yet tarry here with me
until this cage
e'er void of air grows calm,
and whisks my spirit free
from earthen rage,
hate, prejudice and qualms
(vales so shadowy,
guideless paths,
too late the peaceful stag-
ing of that psalm)*

The patient palate's prize
will all the more be
sated once tis served,
as caviar these eyes
long steeped in seasons
di(e)late soon hors d'oeuvres

Eyes scrutinized what taste
that good chef Winter
mirrored the moonshine,
his necessary baste
a gelid dint
the saddened world turns brine**

They've glazed in Autumn's view,
that savory gratin,
earth's golden crust,
leaves thickening the roux,
cilantro orange dis-
bursed among the rusts

Simmered Summer spied
through eyes, bedeviled eggs
warm comfort's nest,
most often there love sighed
tabascoed legs
and fares of zesty breasts

And stewed in Spring's au Jus,
its succulence, its urges,
yes its lusts,
now here at my adieu
your "Quaaaas" become the dirges
at life's dusk

Long braised in saffron light
and cloved in love more often
than would seem,
at times though unrequite
reduced from 'mares
death's softening in dreams

Now fades all visions seen
I go to pay that lofty
kitchen compliments,
this skull, now your tureen,
you'll no doubt quaff
enjoying more its sweet contents

That I'd not die alone
but in the pathos of
your patience spent,
I'll now my sins atone
and rue the wasted
light of life
to dark torment

Proof remains in your footholds,
the well earned etchings
of those wrinkled lines,***
unseen until day grows cold
life was often fetching
and that I've been blind

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.Well, stretch a bit and imagine a man dying in the wilderness, his only witness a crow/raven. To keep the bird from taking his eyes before demise yet not wanting to die alone he makes juicier the prospective meal by explaining its contents and in doing so realizes that he didn't appreciate life and saw too much its dark.
*Psalm 23 that of green pastures and leadeth paths and still waters, things promised in Judeo/Christian beliefs and too often a peace not known in life.
**melting snow, its roll to the salty seas
***laugh lines/crows feet
Photo credit Kathryn Topp



"Nils Desperandum" Wells Family Motto

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Nightshade
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1 posted 2003-04-17 06:58 PM


Long braised in saffron light
and cloved in love more often
than would seem,
at times though unrequite
reduced from 'mares
death's softening in dreams

This on it's own would be excellent to mine eye.....add the rest and I am silenced. Oh, so well written. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-04-17 07:04 PM


May I just sit here quietly,
nodding in amazement...?

*wanted you to know I am here and humbled by your writing poet sir*

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2003-04-17 07:07 PM


Proof remains in your footholds,
the well earned etchings
of those wrinkled lines,***
unseen until day grows cold
life was often fetching
and that I've been blind


haven't we all in some ways?

excellent form... as usual..

Enjoyed.

regards2you
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4 posted 2003-04-17 07:09 PM




Oh my. Stunning.  

Thank you for sharing your poetry here.

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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5 posted 2003-04-17 07:11 PM



OMG...

I'll be back...

1slick_lady
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6 posted 2003-04-17 07:28 PM


richard...i am happy to see that being in exile has not hindered your writing skills...i do hope you are well...helen
Martie
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7 posted 2003-04-17 07:57 PM


Richard...as always your writing leaves me amazed.
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8 posted 2003-04-17 08:12 PM


Richard, once again, your writing has
me in awe and amazement.     

We've missed you, Sir Richard.  

Hugs,
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-04-17 08:17 PM


sideways skittering understood
love the complexity of nested words and images

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10 posted 2003-04-17 10:11 PM


RSWells
An excellent write of moving quality. Glad you are back.  

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11 posted 2003-04-17 10:18 PM


Of course it's excellent but I am thinking about your entries of this day (may take a while too)
Janet Marie
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12 posted 2003-04-17 10:34 PM


They've glazed in Autumn's view,
that savory gratin,
earth's golden crust,
leaves thickening the roux,
cilantro orange dis-
bursed among the rusts


Simmered Summer spied
through eyes, bedeviled eggs
warm comfort's nest,
most often there love sighed
tabascoed legs
and fares of zesty breasts

And stewed in Spring's au Jus,
its succulence, its urges,
yes its lusts,
now here at my adieu
your "Quaaaas" become the dirges
at life's dusk

Long braised in saffron light
and cloved in love more often
than would seem,
at times though unrequite
reduced from 'mares
death's softening in dreams

================================

Have I told you lately that you are too smart for your own good LOL

What I should have said was sometimes youre too brilliant for mere mothy eyes

You're the best I've ever felt ...
it's so wrong not to be with you.
It's getting harder to stay away,
it stops my heart just to be with you.

SH

RSWells
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13 posted 2003-04-17 11:27 PM


Nightshade, thank you for the fine comment.

Enchantress, as always you are most  
             considerate

CPat, thanks buddy

Pat, regards from you are appreciated

Sunshine, come back here!

Helen, I'm a tough ol' bird, thank you

Martie, I could say the same to you

Ethel, I'll try to be less (a) stranger

Midnitesun, lots of twists and turns here
            thanks for hangin' on

Seymour, say no more my friend

Sharon, nothing ominous or mysterious about
        "that"

JM, I know a poem's made it when you bless
    it

Sandpiper
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14 posted 2003-04-18 08:13 AM


Such irony, and profound sadness, to finally see at death's moment just how blind we may have been in life--excellent, as always!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

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