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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-04-17 03:49 PM


Empty promises
Lies told only to your self
Empty as your heart


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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2003-04-17 04:43 PM


Its amazing how easily some people can lie...like you said an empty heart...James
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-04-17 06:27 PM


Self denial
the untimely death
of heart and soul

Awesome Jason
I loved this
xxoo  

dreambuilder
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since 2003-03-23
Posts 319
caddyshack
3 posted 2003-04-17 07:13 PM


Been there
felt that
still despise that evil evil girl

Gina Culliney
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since 2003-03-08
Posts 170

4 posted 2003-04-18 10:38 PM


Jason, as usual you pull these little teaser's, as I like to refer to them, from out of the air.  You pack a lot of emotional punch to your write's.  
SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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California Desert
5 posted 2003-04-19 11:02 AM


Small and punch packing - nice!
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
6 posted 2003-04-19 02:10 PM


so true
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