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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-04-17 06:45 AM





The moon peeked in through
                                               window pane  
balanced high on cottonwood’s

scraggling limb

                 then held onto my sigh…so cruel

that beauty is here, just for thee, just one…

                                      but welcome, April’s fool….


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (04-17-2003 07:56 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-04-17 06:51 AM


Karilea:

this is beautiful - stunning -
yet . . . bittersweet

amazing reading as I watch the sunrise
xxoo

kayjay
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2 posted 2003-04-17 09:31 AM


I wish some way we could really commune with la luna...or maybe we do with writes like this?  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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3 posted 2003-04-17 09:49 AM


You are more than just a fine poetess. You are songstress for your words always sing to my soul...

Love & Light,
Linda

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4 posted 2003-04-17 10:04 AM


Wow !! Beautiful my friend! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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5 posted 2003-04-17 10:53 AM


How lovely..such beautiful words..
~Smiles and hugs to you hip-sis~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2003-04-17 10:59 AM


Now see, Karilea, you just painted another
picture...right here in my mind's eye.  

Thank you for these beautiful images in my mind.
Hugs,
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-04-17 07:33 PM


Karilea, this is simply beautiful and I like how you italicized(sp) the speaking moon here.

Wonderful as usual and I love the format as well.

Maree

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8 posted 2003-04-17 07:37 PM


How'd you know?

I was just discussing symbolism of the Star of David, and how it has some interesting roots of origen.

This is lovely and very astute for those that have understanding eyes to read.

I tip my witch's hat to ya!

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9 posted 2003-04-17 08:10 PM


Karilea...I think the moon more fool than you could ever be.  
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