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0 posted 2003-04-17 01:30 AM




When God gives us nothing
we cry...
when God gives us something
we smile...
but there's a time in our lives
when we neither cry nor smile
it's when we say,
"Thank you God, for giving me Life..."

© Copyright 2003 life - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-04-17 02:50 AM


    

What a wonderful first post, and so true.  Even when we are not asking he is always giving us the greatest gift of all - life!  Welcome to Passions, I know you are going to love it here.  I sure hope to read a lot more of your work in the future.


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passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-04-17 03:06 AM


ah, the in-between! very well said! Welcome to Passions!
Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-04-17 06:26 AM



There is,
just that...
the inbetween...

a great reminder to
not forget to whisper your thanks!

Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

life
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4 posted 2003-04-17 07:15 AM



Thanx friends for all ur support
i sure did enjoy reading all ur poems

luvs
life

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-04-17 04:28 PM


It is nice to appreciate the life God has given us...James
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6 posted 2003-04-17 04:33 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very beautiful and also true first post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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7 posted 2003-04-17 06:25 PM




Yay! God Bless You, sweet friend, yes, and sadly so many take this truth for granted in recent times and still believe material goods bring happiness and it is heartbreaking to see when those people realize the truth and see so much time pass them by, this is a powerful debut, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery.

***Shakira***

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8 posted 2003-04-17 06:48 PM




Enjoyed your first post!!

QjQ
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9 posted 2003-04-18 08:57 PM


I enjoyed reading your write!
          >>QjQ<<
forward to reading  more!

Startime55
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10 posted 2003-04-18 09:04 PM


BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!! You have said it perfectly....I love the power of this poem and the wonderful message touches the soul of your reader...
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