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Our Hearts............(double rictameter)
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Our Hearts............(double rictameter) |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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 Photo "Seven Hearts" by Jim Warren ~~~~~ Our hearts Eternal bond Together for always Even when apart in distance Our hearts seem to beat with the same rhythm With our love and joy felt in them In sync with each other We, together Our hearts Forever love We are in unity Sharing unconditional love We have a special love between us two Giving great strength to each other Our closeness grows daily As we both share Our hearts ~~~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ethel, you are becoming quite the expert of the rictameter! Such ease and grace in your pen! Well done m'friend. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ethel~ Gal, you did this remarkably lovely~ Now somewhere in the forums is a Cinco-Metered one that I did .... ummmmmm, forget just where, but I'll see if I can locate it for you !  AHA ! Found it ! /pip/Forum64/HTML/001963.html Aren't these FUN ! AND ... Vicky STILL owes me one~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you very much, Nancy Lee. I always appreciate your encouraging replies. You are very sweet. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Marge...that was absolutely beautiful. You are a master at doing these. I want to learn how to rhyme them, too. I believe this is my favorite form of poetry, except for rhyming. So, if I can learn to do them together, I'll certainly be a happy writer! Oh, yes, they are so much fun to do. I really enjoy doing them. Oh, is that the proper name for them? I knew they weren't called a "double rictameter", but I didn't know the name. Yep, I do think that Vicky owes you one. I haven't seen one from Vicky like the one you did for her yesterday, either. I love that one, too. Heart Hugs, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-16-2003 09:05 AM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh,Ethel, this is really lovely!! The pic is so pretty too! My, I must learn how to do one of these. There is so much to learn about poetry....it makes me feel like I am the newbie back in highschool...lol. Enjoyed this. hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yep yep yep... you've found your niche! Smiling here! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Ethel! Well you certainly doubled my pleasure with this outstanding double rictameter!!! Huggums, Linda (a fan) |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
Wow! Just Wow! Love reading all these great writes. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Ethel, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, yay, this made me smile as all your gorgeous words do! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Chris  Thank you for your sweet reply. There is a lot to learn about poetry, isn't there? It's so much fun trying to learn to write the different forms, isn't it? Oh, and these rictameters are really easy to learn. You should try them. I think you'll like writing these. This is the syllable count with 9 lines... first line.....2 second line....4 third line.....6 fourth line....8 fifth line.....10 sixth line.....8 seventh line...6 eighth line....4 ninth line.....2 The first line and the ninth line are the same two syllables. If there are anymore technicalities to a rictameter, I don't know them. I'm trying now to learn to rhyme them. I'll be looking for yours. Hugs, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-18-2003 04:56 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, yep, I think I have.... and it sure is fun to do them, too.... Hugs, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey, Linda, I'm really glad that these little poems doubled your pleasure. LOL And, it's really nice to know that I have a fan, too....  Hugs, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Flower, thank you so very much for the "Wow". I really appreciate that. Hugs, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Noah Thank you, friend, for your really nice words. You are so kind. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ethel~ Oh gosh no ... I only called that one a Cinco-Metered one because I used 5 verses strung together~ Lets see - Rictameter Twosie-meter Tres-meter Quatro-meter Cinco-meter Ladedadeedah ... so forth and so on ! Tee-Hee-Hee .... I take 'poetic license' and call 'em whatever boots my fancy~ AND our Vicky is *GIDDY* right now ... but she LOVES (Tee-Hee) a challenge ... soooooooo, I may have to make this an 'official' challenge for her. I'm a 'rhymer' at heart ... but have to break pattern sometimes to learn something new. (Don't tell Balladeer I said that !) He's kinda 'partial' to the rhyme ! BUT ... did you check out her 'Mono-rhymed Acrostic' ???? Koolers that gal !!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Marge, I checked out Vicky's "Mono-rhymed Acrostic" again. I know that I read it when she first posted it, but for some reason didn't reply. Anyway, I did reply and bumped it back up here. Man, she's good, isn't she? Those things are really hard. I just haven't got them right yet. I tried one of them with the rhyme and have only written half of it. I'll be looking for her to meet your challenge on the rictameter. Hugs, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Vandana. I really appreciate you reading and replying to my poems. Hugs, Ethel |
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