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Starsfalling
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some where deep in the shadows

0 posted 2003-04-14 03:04 PM


and then there were two,
two angels, which to choose..
one will lead to eternal happiness,
the other to sorrow and despair...
never knowing which ive chosen,
i walk on...


-lance
may none know the depths of their own personal hell

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

© Copyright 2003 Lance Keber - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-04-14 03:44 PM


I guess I never followed that line of thinking. As close asI came to it, there were always at least three angels.
Interesting post, made me stop and think for a moment or three.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-04-14 04:02 PM


Well, I personally have never known any angels that would lead someone to sorrow and dispair. Perhaps you may be referring to a fallen angel?
If you have a choice, then definitely choose the angel that will lead you to eternal happiness! Interesting poem! Got me thinkin'!

Happy trails to you!

Love & Light,

Earth Angel

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2003-04-14 04:04 PM


Yeah that is a hard topic. I never thought about that before. Hmmmmmmmmm........ This was a thought provoking write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Bombella
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4 posted 2003-04-15 12:05 PM



I agree totally. This was a very thought provoking piece. Very nice indeed!
Cherie..

poetSeaMaiden
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5 posted 2003-04-28 09:55 AM


OH OH OH - I LIKE this so much! You said SO much with so few lines! WOW!  It's so nice to know that someone else out there is unsure of which they've chosen. *sigh* This is incredible, because I know just how you feel, but I never looked at it quite this way before. WOW, I'm just speechless...

I walk on...   I LOVE IT!

~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see.  ~ PoetSeaMaiden

Justbleu
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6 posted 2003-04-29 09:04 AM


I know the reality of my wrong choices....it often hurts deeply.  Good write!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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