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Starsfalling
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since 2003-03-18
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some where deep in the shadows

0 posted 2003-04-28 03:08 PM



a path of pure light,
surrounded by utter night...
life and death, each bound to one another
coiled, neither dominating..
many people walk this path,
each choosing if they should wander off
caught in a struggle, with only one outcome..
death triumphs always..
choice is all the path offers

not very good i know... lol im tired and i wrote in class
-lance

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

© Copyright 2003 Lance Keber - All Rights Reserved
aries_luv_ppl
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Universal Mind
1 posted 2003-04-28 03:41 PM


Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

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Gaia
2 posted 2003-04-28 05:00 PM


No need to apologize for a fine poem which offers good thoughts to ponder.
I enjoyed this write.

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2003-04-29 08:59 AM


Good write.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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