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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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If I could turn back time I would do it all differently. I would have let you be whomever you wanted to be and played my part. After all, truth wasn't so important, now that I can rationalize and can see the outcome of knowing. My days wouldn't have been wasted in wanting to hold you in reserve, keeping you motivated learning the dimensions of me. We would have been surfacing together, glazing the real, being shallow but satisfied with whatever loomed ahead. The future wouldn't have mattered and the past memories would be obsolete, as we would live for the moment. You would have been my cutting edge. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
"You would have been my cutting edge." WOW... A great write this one... regards, sudhir |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Not only do write class A poetry, but you have a talent for coming up with the best titles! They draw readers in--and they deliver! Huggums, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hmmmm.... I wonder why I can relate to this so deeply M. First, little pieces and then the whole shabang... nicely done. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sudhir, thank you. Earth Angel, sometimes I open my thesaurus for a better word...and that is when a unique title may hit me. I am glad you enjoy my words. *s M Thanks Dixie, I know we have a lot in common. hugss M |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
You write very nice poetry..... Enjoyed!!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
great work here M. . . yes, I know this play very well. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Bridgette...I appreciate your responses hugss M Hi Sven, you are greatly missed when you disappear for such a length of time... Thank you. Yes, I suppose many of us have known this situation. Hopefully we learn from it.  M |
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