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She Was For Sale

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passing shadows
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50 posted 04-15-2003 02:15 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

will be back for another read!
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51 posted 04-15-2003 10:14 AM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

Wow, what a ride! We're crazy if this doesn't make the book..........

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52 posted 04-15-2003 11:07 AM       View Profile for KristieSue   Email KristieSue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit KristieSue's Home Page   View IP for KristieSue

wow

I never saw the ending coming.  How sad!  Wonderful story ;-)

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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53 posted 04-17-2003 11:46 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

BUMP!
JP
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54 posted 04-17-2003 04:44 PM       View Profile for JP   Email JP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JP's Home Page   View IP for JP

Wow.

Vividly simple and stunning.  Well worth the pages of our family's book.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

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55 posted 04-21-2003 12:22 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

BUMP!
Jeremy Halstead
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56 posted 04-21-2003 01:06 AM       View Profile for Jeremy Halstead   Email Jeremy Halstead   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeremy Halstead

this piece...interesting...you paint a picture in such detail and vibrant color, yet a mystery all the same.  I originally was not going to vote because I couldn't unravel the truth. However, after checking out vlraynes reply, I got it....incredible, so obvious  to a more innocent soul, but not mine(or propably most)...loved it... got my vote.

Jeremy


Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

[This message has been edited by Jeremy Halstead (04-21-2003 01:08 AM).]

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57 posted 04-21-2003 01:49 PM       View Profile for QjQ   Email QjQ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for QjQ

quite a interesting write. holds attention
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58 posted 04-23-2003 07:39 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress


keeping this up there
I haven't come across a poem of yours that I don't like.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

Justbleu
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59 posted 04-23-2003 11:14 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I wonder if there's such a thing as honorary inclusion....

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Justbleu
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60 posted 04-28-2003 11:16 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Bump....

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Lynda
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61 posted 04-28-2003 11:45 AM       View Profile for Lynda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynda

I have read and have been intrigued....I have solved? and questioned too....I need a picture or words that mean...
or poem I have not seen...
Lynda
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62 posted 04-28-2003 05:15 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

she belongs in the book

"But the curves still called
While strobing red screaming neon nightlights
Painted a rosy blush
That feigned a more youthful polish."

oh man, I really liked this imagery!
play me again, Sir

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (04-28-2003 05:23 PM).]

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63 posted 04-28-2003 05:46 PM       View Profile for junemac   Email junemac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit junemac's Home Page   View IP for junemac

i am sure by the time you get my reply, you will have had everything already said, but........ just wanted to say i am stunned by this, its truly a masterpiece.

thank you for your amazing storytelling,

june x

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64 posted 04-29-2003 04:43 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I would truly love to see this in the book.
Denise
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66 posted 05-10-2003 12:07 AM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

To one and all... many thanks for the kind words and multiple bumps.  It does a heart  well.  Peace to all.
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67 posted 05-11-2003 10:54 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

How many bumps will it take?

Ron, oh dearest Wizard, WE ALL WANT THIS ONE in Reflections.
PLEASE?
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68 posted 05-11-2003 03:01 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Drew,
So glad you revisited us with this one, it's been a long time. The title didn't jog my memory, but, after about three lines it all came back as fresh as the first time. The check's in the box.
Doc
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69 posted 05-11-2003 08:21 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

Great story, wonderful written!
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70 posted 05-13-2003 08:48 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

I always knew you were a talent but this piece is amazing. I have to add this to my favorite list and read it several more times.

Marilyn
 
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