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Open Poetry #24

The Climax Of Each Moment

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-01-19 11:55 PM

Here, in face-to-face, I see beyond the spirit of myself
As heat pounds forth in driving exclamation
When eyes are wide and deep to capture almost fear
Without pronunciation

And clearly fire, and clearly seeking of the crest that builds
Of Mountains
The sinking into bottomless tranquility
Your eyes to mine a dual and wild annunciation
As it fountains

Foretold in tenderly unfolding touches for each bud to flower
Here, I seek to be engaged in knowing every ticking
Of an everlasting endless hour

Copyright Kkh 1/19/03

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-01-20 02:50 AM

fine work! enjoyed this much!

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2003-01-20 09:50 AM

Astonished, though shouldn't be at this point of reading your poetry, at how well written this is....

You certainly captured the moments of a blissful hour.

This is wonderful.

Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-01-20 10:22 AM

I would like to have one of those endless hours that leaves me smiling

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

4 posted 2003-01-20 10:47 AM

A lovely moment.

Ed

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