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zenny
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0 posted 2003-01-10 01:35 PM


3months ago,
you remember that?
an unlocking gate
both of us so glad.

Frightened look
wishfull smile
Hopegiving words
and a kiss after a while

The warmth of love
our ice melted away
from that moment on
i wished for you to stay

Now, 3months later
our feelings still not sore
Lemme simply say: I love you
and.. lets go for another 3 months .. and more


---
Wrote it for my boyfriend.. now we are together for 3months this monday

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

© Copyright 2003 Kelly Verbeeck - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-01-10 03:06 PM


Zenny... I hope the 3 months are filled with pleasures for both of you...
nicely written..I am sure he would like it.


Midnitesun
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2 posted 2003-01-10 03:58 PM


Taking it three months at a time, heh? Not a bad idea really.
Now, let's see, 3x100....

zenny
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since 2002-11-24
Posts 371
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3 posted 2003-01-10 03:59 PM


thanks for your reply cpat

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

christian
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since 2002-12-18
Posts 331

4 posted 2003-01-10 04:01 PM



lucky guy.

nice idea and concept. take it easy.

-chris

zenny
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5 posted 2003-01-10 04:01 PM


midnightsun, thanks for replying too
and hmmmm 3*100... would be wonderfull but i'll take it how it comes

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

zenny
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since 2002-11-24
Posts 371
Belgium
6 posted 2003-01-10 04:02 PM


chris a warm thanks for your kind reply

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

lucky
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7 posted 2003-01-10 04:34 PM


no critique needed here
just beautiful

lucky dale

zenny
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since 2002-11-24
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8 posted 2003-01-11 06:20 AM


thanks for sharing your opinion lucky

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
9 posted 2003-01-11 01:16 PM


well, ya gotta start somewhere.

Here's to another 3 months and more!

zenny
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since 2002-11-24
Posts 371
Belgium
10 posted 2003-01-11 05:19 PM


thanks shadows

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

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