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Drexler_McStyles
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0 posted 2003-01-10 01:57 AM


frolicking on a creaky stair
outside my studio
she in her pebbled attire
and I in my lecherous skin
I have water boiling
on the stove
some southern vision
of my culinary design
concocted with vague precision
but like most of my plans;
in the purgatory of the preparatory stage
Irish vodka
on the sale rack
now is in my kitchen
half drained
and the night
is still simmering on the back burner
her heels click as she spirals up 4 flights
going to progress into something
more comfortable
something for me
to lay to ground
when I begin to commence the ravagery
after my jambalaya
is brewed and consumed
and video drop boxes
are satisfied
eventually
a light rapping on my door
pink floyd riding the hi-fi
and the star light
lit like I am
it will be then
that things get….
censored

[This message has been edited by Drexler_McStyles (01-10-2003 01:57 PM).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-01-10 07:03 PM


chuckling...

I wish I knew how to do one of those black box censor things...so subtle, ain't they?

I liked the language of this...I could smell the fish fry mon amis!

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-01-10 09:53 PM


I love Pink Floyd but don't do vodka. LOVE this line:
concocted with vague precision


Now that's precision I understand.

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