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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-12-22 10:41 AM


Icicle Warmth

I surround myself
in beauty
and find you
laced to
timeless strings
of web
colored light
refracting the sun
hues bounce off
of dripping icicles
exploding
to caress
your face
and in
a world
of coldness
I find
warmth


“life is not about breathing moments, it is about moments that leave you breathless.” author unknown

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
1 posted 2002-12-22 12:01 PM


I guess at the right given moment ... we can see the beauty in everyone and everything

enjoyed these thoughts

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-12-22 02:59 PM




(smiles) All it takes is a smile, a blessing you count to make the icicles that feel cold in your world glass-blown into prism and reflect the colors of the world that feel soft to the tender touch! (kiss on cheek) This is precous, sweet friend, I love this gem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

winston
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since 2002-12-19
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NW of Eden
3 posted 2002-12-22 03:07 PM


1slick_lady, this is one slick poem. I like the way it's been centred, and made to look like the words are standing precariously.

"am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak

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